Marathon

By Anonymous -

Bang,the blocks scrunch together. Jogging her heart out huffing and puffing thinking if she runs the hill then Pepuere will probably come in place. "AHHH," She replied her legs are starting to look like a slow statue.

Three drops of sweat slid down her wet forehead. I really think I'm in a marathon. On my third lap sighting boys zooming up the hill "Ewe they smell like b.o," She widespread. At the top of the wobbly hill a very fit girl comes by and says "Keep on running" Boosting off trying to chase Keisha zooming down the steep grass "Ha caught up to you Keisha,".

Comments

  1. Whaea Kat7 September 2017 at 11:22

    I really like that you are trying to write in a different tense (third person). You need to keep this consistent throughout the whole piece of writing.

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