Art picture

By Anonymous -
Art picture

Looking at the beautiful plain white wall thinking what to draw on it either singing or nature. Putting my hands gently on my chin studying in my mind where i'm gonna place the art “Clara what should we draw on the wall or either singing or nature,” I shouted then i just noticed that we was at university “Shh,’ replied Clara. Placing my hand on the wall already picturing what i’m going to draw.

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  1. Whaea Kat7 September 2017 at 11:26

    I like that you are using more descriptive language. Remember that each time somebody speaks, the sentence starts on a new line. Is there anything else that you could change or improve?

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